At 11: 30 am on June 7, the 2019 college entrance examination for Chinese subjects officially ended.
In 2019, there were 8 sets of examination papers in the Chinese Language Department of the National College Entrance Examination, including 3 sets of unified orders from the Examination Center of the Ministry of Education and 5 sets of independent orders from Beijing, Tianjin, Shanghai, Jiangsu and Zhejiang provinces. The Paper invited experts and Chinese teachers to comment on the composition questions in eight sets of papers one by one.
As for the essay questions of three sets of national volumes, Huang Dechu, a special-grade teacher in affiliated high school of south china normal university, thinks that all three sets of questions emphasize "writing with me". "That is to say, I am a contemporary youth, and I am a candidate who wants to enter the examination room. When writing, I emphasize realism more." In addition, the three sets of questions are all real scenes, and the tasks are clear. "Tell me who I am, to whom, why and how to write."
Li Haiyun, an associate professor at the Academy of Education Sciences of Shanxi Normal University, thinks that the compositions of Beijing, Tianjin, Jiangsu, Shanghai and Zhejiang have a certain depth, "but I personally prefer the three topics in the south. The essays in Jiangsu, Shanghai and Zhejiang have a lot of room for thinking and play. "
[National Volume I]
Read the following materials and write as required.
"People’s livelihood is diligent, but diligence is not scarce", and labor is the source of wealth and happiness. "Sleeping at night, sweeping the court" and loving labor are the excellent traditions of the Chinese nation, which have continued to this day. But in real life, there are also some students who don’t understand labor and don’t want to work. Some said, "We are so busy studying that labor takes up too much time!" " Some said, "With the rapid progress of science and technology, labor can be left to artificial intelligence in the future!" Others said, "Labor is so hard and tiring, why do you have to do it yourself? Spend some money to let others do it! " In addition, there are some phenomena around us that don’t respect labor.
This has aroused people’s deep thinking.
Please write a speech for the students in our school (collectively referred to as "Fuxing Middle School") in combination with the content of the materials, and advocate that everyone "love labor and start from me", reflect your understanding and thinking, and put forward hopes and suggestions. Requirements: self-made title, self-selected angle, and determined idea; Do not copy or copy; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
Expert comments
Xiao Gang (Chinese teacher of Guangzhou No.6 Middle School):This year’s national volume I composition continues to be presented in the form of "task-driven" material composition, and the topic of the material is very clear. "In the renaissance era, we must love and respect labor"; The task instruction is clear, and candidates are required to write a speech to the students of Fuxing Middle School. The specific requirement is to "reflect their own understanding and thinking, and put forward hopes and suggestions".
The topic well embodies the fundamental educational task of "cultivating people by virtue", which not only embodies the grand social issues, but also suits the reality of each candidate. Both the candidates and the senior three preparation teachers have made perfect preparations, whether it is the material content or the "task instruction" or even the specific requirements. It should be said that this topic is completely "expected". In addition, I have to say that the essay questions of Guangzhou Ermo are "similar" to this.
Since 2016, a volume of national essays has maintained a good stability. Whether it is the concept of rewards and punishments in 2016, the concept of China in 2017, the concept of the future in 2018, or the concept of labor in 2019, it is basically not "hurting" candidates in the examination session, and the topic is also relevant to the candidates’ reality and directed at the present. Personally, I appreciate the proposition of a volume.
Zhang Hongbo (Associate Professor, Chinese Department, Sichuan International Studies University):The national volume I looks easy, but in fact I don’t think it’s easy to write. Although labor is closely related to us, it is only easy to be superficial and superficial, so we certainly can’t get the ideal score. Reading materials, we should first clarify the concept of labor, there is no doubt that this refers to manual labor. Then from which angles should we analyze labor and analyze the benefits of labor? Four bodies are not diligent, regardless of the grain, and labor is the foundation of the body. Many times, good physical fitness is tempered in long-term labor. From the perspective of literature, Mr. Lu Xun said that literature originated from labor. From the perspective of scientific and technological progress, many ideas of invention originate from labor. From the perspective of life, labor can forge collective character and unite others … … The reason why there is International Labor Day shows that labor is a common behavior advocated by all mankind.
Li Haiyun (Associate Professor, Academy of Educational Sciences, Shanxi Normal University):The national volume I is easy to break, but it may not be easy to write new ideas or profound meanings.
Candidate evaluation
Hubei candidate Yang Jiahui:I think the topic of Chinese this time is relatively peaceful. We have practiced the composition style of the speech before, but we haven’t written the topic of "loving labor", and the difficulty of composition is still moderate.
Hubei examinee Xiong classmate:This essay topic feels good, not difficult, but I really haven’t prepared it before.
Shenzhen candidates are classmates:The topic of the composition feels deja vu. We have done a composition with the theme of "labor" in the grade unified examination before, but we are still prepared and the difficulty is not very high.
Xiamen candidate Cai:This topic is almost the same as that of the previous city inspection, and it is very difficult to talk about the spirit of labor. What impressed me the most is that "a glass of wine makes a home in Wan Li, but Yan Ran has not lost his mind", which I just saw before the exam.
[National Volume II]
Read the following materials and write as required.
In 1919, when the nation was in danger, young students in China set off a great patriotic revolutionary movement that was completely anti-imperialist and anti-feudal. In 1949, Chinese stood up! Young people in New China devote themselves to the new journey of motherland construction. In 1979, the "spring of science" was full of vitality, and students were eager to serve the country and merged into the torrent of reform and opening up. In 2019, the young China triumphed, and the young people in the new era bravely took the baton and swore that "a strong country has me". In 2049, the Chinese nation achieved great rejuvenation, and China youth continued to struggle … …
Please choose one of the following tasks to finish your writing as a young student party.
(1) on May 4, 1919, the speech at the student rally.
(2) on October 1, 1949, after attending the founding ceremony celebration parade, I wrote a letter to my family.
On September 15th, 1979, I wrote a letter to my classmates after attending the opening ceremony of freshmen.
4 On April 30, 2019, I watched the "100th Anniversary of the May 4th Movement".
⑤ On September 30th, 2049, I wrote a National Day condolence letter to a "century-old China meritorious figure".
Requirements: combine the materials, choose the angle, and determine the idea; Fit the identity and background; Conform to stylistic features; Do not copy or copy; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
Expert comments
Xiao Gang (Chinese teacher of Guangzhou No.6 Middle School):Compared with Volume II in 2018, this year’s national composition in Volume II is a normal regression, which belongs to a typical "task-driven" material composition. The material selects five landmark time nodes and events to show the close connection between youth and the motherland in different times. The proposer’s "value orientation" is to guide candidates to think about "I am a contemporary (1919/1949/1979/2019/). The key is to pay special attention to ①— ⑤ The scene definition and specific task instructions in ⑤involve at least applied styles such as speeches, letters and post-review, and the awareness of identity and role and communication situation must be strong.
Zhang Hongbo (Associate Professor, Chinese Department, Sichuan International Studies University):National Volume II Some people may think that history is too strong. This year belongs to a special year, and many historic events happened in the year related to 9. I believe that many teachers and students should have noticed this when simulating test questions. Candidates can choose a year that they are familiar with or interested in according to their own characteristics, and write a good article in combination with the major events of the times.
Li Haiyun (Associate Professor, Academy of Educational Sciences, Shanxi Normal University):Choosing several important time nodes for more than one hundred years in the national II volume requires candidates to have a macro vision and be able to experience themselves in the imagination of a certain time node, which requires both rational thinking and passion. It is not difficult to solve the problem, but it is not easy to write well.
Dai Wei (Head of Chinese Teaching and Research in Ape Counseling Senior High School):This year’s college entrance examination composition is still based on society and reality, examining students’ concern for society and the country, and paying attention to the combination of individual and national times. The national II volume selects the more important time nodes in history. This requires students to put themselves under a grand historical background and write in combination with their own situation. From this we can also see a trend — — Historical events are not only cold written records in textbooks, but also require students to understand that era and background, and to feel and think. Really combine the major historical events of the country with individual students.
[National Volume III]
Read the following cartoon materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
(According to the adaptation of "Kobayashi Comics") Requirements: Combine the content and meaning of the material, choose a good angle, determine the concept, clarify the style, and draw up the title by yourself; Do not copy or copy; Personal information shall not be disclosed.
Expert comments
Dai Wei (Head of Chinese Teaching and Research in Ape Counseling Senior High School):The proposition that impressed me this year is the national three volumes, which is a comic composition. The text in the cartoon is that the teacher said that in the last class before graduation, you should read books again and I will look at you again. This material is extremely warm among many materials that pay attention to society and the country. However, what we can see from the back of the cartoon is actually not only a teacher’s reluctance to students, but also a simple teacher-student relationship. It guides candidates to pay attention to the truest feelings around them, and those feelings that often appear around us are the most easily overlooked by us.
Xiao Gang (Chinese teacher of Guangzhou No.6 Middle School):In 2016, the first volume of the whole country was a comic book essay, and this year’s three-volume essay is also a comic book essay, so candidates will not feel strange. The content of cartoons is concise and clear. When examining the questions, we should pay attention to the specific "writing background" of "the last lesson before graduation". Everyday teachers are busy teaching, students are busy listening to lectures, and rarely calm down and feel — — Teachers feel the loveliness of students, and students feel the experience of meditation and self-study. On the occasion of parting, meditation is not only touching, but also inspiring, inspiring us to cherish the opportunity to get along and cherish the time we have — — Trees are there, mountains are there, the earth is there, years are there, I am there, and you are there. This is the most beautiful world.
[Beijing Volume]
Choose one of the following two questions and answer as required. No less than 700 words. Copy the questions on the answer sheet.
(1) "toughness" refers to the soft and solid nature of the object, which is not easy to break. Chinese civilization, which has gone through wind and rain, continues to this day, embodying the spirit of "tenacity". Looking back at the long history of China, the resilience of this civilization is particularly evident at critical moments. The great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation needs to stimulate the resilience of this civilization.
Please write an argumentative essay on the topic of "the resilience of civilization". You can talk about your thoughts from the perspectives of China’s historical changes, ideology and culture, language and writing, literature and art, social life and Chinese’s character.
Requirements: clear views, sufficient arguments and reasonable arguments.
2 color refers to color; Different colors are often given different meanings. In 2019, we solemnly commemorate the 100th anniversary of the May 4th Movement and celebrate the 70th birthday of the Republic. As a student taking the college entrance examination in this special year, what color will you give to 2019 to vividly express your feelings and understanding?
Please write a narrative with the theme of "Color in 2019".
Requirements: healthy thinking, substantial content, sincere feelings, using narrative, description and lyric and other expressions.
Expert comments
Zhang Xinke (Professor of Chinese Curriculum and Teaching Theory, School of Teacher Education, East China Normal University):Beijing Volume provides two topics and two writing styles for students to choose from, taking full account of different students’ accumulated materials and different stylistic writing abilities.
Among them, "the resilience of civilization" is of the times, which requires candidates to pay attention to the national tradition and national destiny. The conception and propositional way of "Color of 2019" is similar to that of the national volume I in 2018, which adopts a situational setting and task-driven way.
Zhang Hongbo (Associate Professor, Chinese Department, Sichuan International Studies University):Material 1 is suitable for writing argumentative essays, which tests the cultural literacy of candidates, their usual accumulation and the depth of thinking. Material 2 is relatively easy to play, and it is easier to combine narrative and lyric. It is relatively easy to get high marks.
[Shanghai Volume]
After listening to the music of different countries and being exposed to different styles of exotic tones, I have a deeper feeling of the "Chinese flavor" of music, so as to look for the "Chinese flavor" more consciously.
This passage can inspire people how to know things. Please write an article about your thoughts and feelings about the above materials. Requirements: (1) self-made topics; (2) Not less than 800 words.
Expert comments
Zhang Xinke (Professor of Chinese Curriculum and Teaching Theory, School of Teacher Education, East China Normal University):The materials of Shanghai Volume are selected from Xin Fengnian’s Intriguing Chinese Taste and Reading, No.2, 1990. It continues the dialectical nature of previous years’ topics, involving the angle and method of understanding things. Pay attention to yourself from the perspective of others, or know yourself by observing others, so that we can see their differences, especially their own characteristics, in comparison. The "other" here can be others or other countries, and so on.
Ye Kai (a famous writer and Chinese educator):Our college entrance examination essay proposition always gives me the feeling that we are doing Dojo in a snail’s shell. The space is very small, similar to Suzhou gardens, which can only be tortuous and tortuous, and it is really very difficult. Writing should have been bright, lively and enjoyable, and teenagers’ writing should have been full of imagination and creativity. Only in this way can we enhance the creativity and competitiveness of our culture in the 21st century information civilization era with imagination and creativity as the core. For an ordinary teenager, they spent most of their three years in high school brushing questions, tutoring and staying up late, not to mention listening to music, and even playing games without any time or space. I don’t have a certain time to listen to music, and I don’t have a certain opportunity to go to the theater to watch and listen to live performances. Where did I get the music feeling? If it is necessary to rise to "Chinese flavor", then these children who love to listen to European and American pop styles, Japanese pop music and famous game theme music can only talk hard about "correct thinking" and "baiwan", and maybe they can make up a few words. Why must we look for "Chinese flavor"? Why can’t it be a global vision and mind? Not only our students, but also proposers should have a broader vision and mind, otherwise, Mr. Ren Zhengfei’s question of "basic education" is still a game and a dream.
Candidate evaluation
Shanghai candidate Chen Tong:We have practiced this topic before, so I don’t think it is very difficult, but it will be more difficult to start because I don’t know much about music, so I think it is ok in the end.
[Jiangsu Volume]
According to the following materials, choose the angle, make your own topic, and write an article of not less than 800 words; Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Everything has its own characteristics, water is light and salt tastes good. Water with water or water, salt with salt or salt. Sweet, sour, bitter, spicy and salty, five flavors are harmonious, coexist and coexist, and there are many flavors. Things are like this, things are still the same, and so are people.
Expert comments
Zhang Xinke (Professor of Chinese Curriculum and Teaching Theory, School of Teacher Education, East China Normal University):It is not easy to examine the questions in Jiangsu papers. In the first half, "everything has its own characteristics", which means that it can maintain its own characteristics; In the second half, "coexistence and coexistence" can also be mixed in the group. It seems that you can choose either way of life or both. However, its expression implies a tendency to belittle the former and affirm the latter, because there is "water with water or water, salt with salt or salt", which means it is monotonous.
Zhang Hongbo (Associate Professor, Chinese Department, Sichuan International Studies University):Jiangsu volume is very cultural and philosophical. For candidates, there will be no unclear or wrong questions. This topic mainly emphasizes the mutual solubility between individual characteristics and groups. Individuals should never refuse the infiltration of strange elements, nor should they reject different opinions and practices, but how to complement each other and live in harmony, so that the colors of the world will be rich and colorful and life will be rich and wonderful. Of course, in the end, it should rise to the national level to form sublimation. Civilization itself is pluralistic and complementary, and all civilizations should coexist harmoniously.
Candidate evaluation
Jiangsu examinee Lin:This topic feels a little difficult, and it’s easy to digress. I wrote about groups and personalities. I hope I didn’t digress. Personally, I feel that the overall difficulty is ok. It took some time to review the composition, and I was in a hurry at last.
[Tianjin Volume]
Read the following materials and write as required.
Yes, the present China is broken, the country is harmful and the people are poor, but who can assert that China does not have a bright future? No, never. We believe that China must have a bright future to praise.
— — fang zhimin
The country belongs to everyone. Patriotism is a personal duty.
— — Tao Xingzhi
If you can make a small wave and roar into the torrent of devotees to promote the development of human history, I think this is the most proud thing in your life.
— — danian huang
What kind of thinking and feeling did the above materials trigger you? Please write an article on this basis.
Requirements: ① Choose your own angle and make your own title; ② The style is not limited (except poetry), with obvious stylistic features;
(3) not less than 800 words; (4) shall not be copied, not interplanting.
Expert comments
Zhang Xinke (Professor of Chinese Curriculum and Teaching Theory, School of Teacher Education, East China Normal University):The idea is to speculate on the relationship between individuals and collectives, which is more restrictive; It requires "unlimited style (except poetry) and obvious stylistic features", which not only emphasizes unlimited style, but also gives students great choices; It also prevents the appearance of "mule-like" articles that are neither donkey nor horse, and emphasizes clear stylistic awareness.
Zhang Hongbo (Associate Professor, Chinese Department, Sichuan International Studies University):The original intention of Tianjin’s questioner is to carry forward the spirit of patriotism and cast personal struggle into the tide of dedication to the country. This can be written as an argumentative paper, starting with the relationship between the individual and the country and the relationship between the individual and the whole; You can also write a narrative and fill the article with examples you have mastered.
[Zhejiang Volume]
Read the following text and write as required.
There is a view that writers should keep readers in mind when writing and listen to their voices.
Another view is that writers should stick to their own ideas and not be influenced by readers when writing.
If you are a "writer" who creates life and your life becomes a "work", how will you treat your "readers"?
Write an article according to the material and talk about your opinion.
[Note] ① Self-determination, self-selection of angles and self-drafting of topics. (2) clear style, shall not be written as poetry. ③ No less than 800 words. (4) shall not be copied, interplanting.
Expert comments:
Zhang Xinke (Professor of Chinese Curriculum and Teaching Theory, School of Teacher Education, East China Normal University):Zhejiang Volume is similar to the composition "Evaluating the Life of Others" in the 2016 Shanghai College Entrance Examination, except that it replaces itself with others as "author" and "reader". The purpose is to guide students to think about the relationship between individuals and others, that is, how to treat others’ views on themselves, and then influence their own choices. In addition, the way of setting the situation is adopted, which is not only convenient for candidates to conceive, but also allows them to know others. (The Paper reporter Li Siwen Liao Wei He Liquan Intern Hu Tianyi Chen Yuxi Sun Xiang Xia Yuyang)
